Velaho attended to the boy as he passed out. Catching and caring for the body, giving the heart just enough strength to go on. Breck went ahead of the car to make sure all traffic lights they passed were green and then planted a need of haste in the mother. As the mother drove to the hospital, unaware of the boys state, Breck joined in with Velaho as he sung the healing song. When the car arrived at the hospital there was a blur of panic and screams of help when the mother realised her son had passed out. Breck and Velaho stood back and nodded a notification to the two angels accompanying the paramedics. They accompanied the boy as he was rushed into the ER. Whether it was days or hours the messengers did not notice, for they did not acknowledge time when they did not need to. They prayed as scans were taken of his body. They stood against the wall in the operating room as the healing angels (healers who were assigned to the doctors) sang their songs over the boy and guided the surgeons hands. When the boy's surgery was finished he was wheeled into the ICU. In the small room stood Emerlo. Berk's blue eyes brightened, he had fought along Emerlo's side in Germany, he was one of the best influencers. Velaho was relieved to have a third comrade, singing for a failing heart had not been easy and influencers were always helpful in the manipulation of human materials. After Berk and Emerlo exchanged bows, Emerlo asked Velaho the state of the boy.
"The boy's name is Simon Macvey. When he was conscious I detected that his spirit was very strong yet very troubled and distressed. In his body I felt irregular activity on his left lung. The scans showed a tumor and the surgeons have just removed it. Tonight he is very vulnerable to attack so we must be on alert." Velaho said somberly.
"Simon will live then." Emerlo affirmed, and he began tinkering with the IV's going to Simons body.
3 comments:
You've got an incredible story going here, Canim. I can see the action, feel the import of the situation. Good attention to descriptives.
Double check the punctuation and some of the misspellings, because just exactly right now I'm sitting in front of a prof who is telling us that a Reader gets distracted from some of the best ideas by the presentation (or lack of it). Your ideas are WAAAAY too great to be distracted by little things.
Absolutely awesome. Tell Thayer to write up that class credit for this :-)
Seni cok seviyorum--bildigin gibi. Annecigim xoxo
just tried this but will try again. This is an amazing piece of work! I knew you could write but this is something quite incrediable...will have to have you come up with the course description...keep it up!
Not only can you think brilliantly, write articulately, express the inexplicable in an understable manner, but now you are writing gripping fiction. What a gift. I can't wait for the next installment. I am hooked!
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